Wow, Grocel, Really?
First off, this is a perfectly acceptable loop. I think it deserves a 9/10, it's incredibly catchy, obviously layered, and it seems like you probably had a lot of fun making this relatively short loop. I'm giving it a 10/10 though, to pull up the overall score.
Secondly, learn to freaking write, Grocel. "...end of it must be hear like the beginning." What? If you mean it must loop correctly, it DOES. Otherwise, it's a matter of opinion, not a fact as you seem to be saying.
Thirdly, Grocel, this is Father-of-Death. Go check out some of his other stuff, the guy's been around for quite a while, and he's pretty good at what he does. ;)