I like everything here except...
...The staccato string loop. I'm just taking a wild guess here, but is that a loop?
It sounds like a pre-rendered sound that came with Magix Music Maker a couple years back. Still, good track, and lots of stuff here. 9/10
Hi there! Thanks for the review. Hmmm...I'm not using any loops. What don't you like about it? Any things you can offer in terms of constructive criticism? I'm always trying to get better. Thanks!
This is a great loop, and musically, you really know what your doing! I loved the triplets (it might not have been triplets, but it was some funky time sig stuff) at 0:42! Great beat, nothing to not love here.
Thanks. I'm really appreciaitng it. And yepp those were some triplets. I tried to experiment a little bit with this loop.
Wow, Grocel, Really?
First off, this is a perfectly acceptable loop. I think it deserves a 9/10, it's incredibly catchy, obviously layered, and it seems like you probably had a lot of fun making this relatively short loop. I'm giving it a 10/10 though, to pull up the overall score.
Secondly, learn to freaking write, Grocel. "...end of it must be hear like the beginning." What? If you mean it must loop correctly, it DOES. Otherwise, it's a matter of opinion, not a fact as you seem to be saying.
Thirdly, Grocel, this is Father-of-Death. Go check out some of his other stuff, the guy's been around for quite a while, and he's pretty good at what he does. ;)
:3 Oh stop it.
i don't want to sound harsh, i love remixes and video game music, but if i hadn't liked the game so much you prolly wouldn't have gotten that high of a score from me. come up with something original. i bet you could come up with something just as good if you put enough time into it.
I don't have the talent some other artists have, so i rely heavily on midi files. i may try to make something original, but realize your asking a lot from me.
idk if you even realize, but at the 0:32 mark your music takes on a very peculiar similarity to one of lemon demon's songs. i'm sure that this is just a coincidence, but i thot i would point it out. at around 1:03 this similarity disappears completely.
somewhat repetitive, yet in way, not repetitive at all. weird track, i can see this music in a video game when you're in like a store buying items or something. reminds me of banjo kazooie.
pretty good actually. and your singing is fine.
Thank you so much Listen! I always thought my singing was horrendous, but people actually seem to be enjoying this. Thank you again!!!
i like just drum beats, but you need more, drumbeats alone don't make a song. very nice drumbeat tho, try building around what you already have here cuz it's already pretty good.
Dude this song is screaming for the acapella. Srsly if u put the actual linkin park acapella for faint over this thing it'd be the awesomest remix in the world, lol.
Dude, u got the notes right but holy crap! the guitar in the chorus sounds awful and its so dang loud. u kinda need to add in drums too.
U got all the notes nailed exactly, but u need to choose some different synths. Needs to be labeled under miscellaneous too.
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